Score: 8

"The flash is good"

submission: The Bar Pick-Up

date: May 27, 2007

Yes, the flash is good, the story isn't.
The "game" you play in there would work about 5% of the time in real life, no more. Those money moves were crap to be honest.

Basically you keep pushing her to come to your apartment, get some cocktails TONS of times and you keep reminding her you do NOT want to nail her.
No, that's not a good thing. Every girl knows you want to fuck her when you take her home, and every girl knowingly wants to be fucked when she comes with you. You promising her straight to her face, without blinking you have no intentions will just make her think of you as a cooked out liar. Or plain annoying for constantly nagging her to come to her apartment.

Also, what some people (especially you) seem to be forgetting is that the apartment is the LAST move.
By the time you offer her to come to your apartment she must already be drunk/horny/completely into you. In the game you buy her a drink, dance for a minute and already force the choice of "apartment or nothing" onto her.

Get out there into the game bro, nail some girls for real, if your cute and got a decent game you can get laid every night. It's not hard, i can know :)

NOTE: You do have some of the basics laid out nicely though, like the follow me shit, you do have to mark your territory ;)

Score: 8

"yay"

submission: School Madness 2

date: May 8, 2007

That was WELL good, some very nice work you've done here.
These series keep amazing me, i love the action. Kill after kill after kill!
Even though i think the opponents in this one are a bit too easy.
They just stand around to be killed most of the time, their (re)action speed is just too slow.
If you work on that, these are some unbreakable series. KEEP IT UP!

-question, what was the music you used? The last song in particular.

And to sword23, stfu.
Oh noez peoplez got shot at dem schoolz by sum crazy korean kid so let's spam senseless reviews WAAH!!

Shit happens! People get shot all over the world daily, and it isn't the first time a shooting took place at a school.
No sensible artist will hold back GOOD work just because of a few people who are still traumatised or whatever. You read the title and you know what the flash is about. If you were really so upset you'd be somewhere else than behind your computer, surfing sites like newgrounds.

Score: 10

"YAY!"

submission: Virus Alert - "Weird Al"

date: May 8, 2007

Man i have to tell you.. First off i got a major headache, fever and i'm on the internet owning noobs taking sick pleasure from their suffering.
Then, when i found your song i was -this- close to clicking it away, prejudging it on my mood.

But MAN was that awesome. You actually made me smile :)
Thank you. I'm giving this flash a straight out 10/10!

You truly are one of the best.
May this live on the frontpage, FOREVER!